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避免这十大错误,让高考英语作文满分成现实!

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近年来高考英语书面表达阅卷采用新标准,要求考生使用高级句型、高级词汇,过渡性词汇和不同表达方式,从而增加文章的可读性和醒目性,诚然这些都是高考英语书面表达重要考点,然而在刻苦训练达到新标准要求的同时,千万不要忘了应注意的表达的准确性,这是书面表达最本质的东西,也是高考最重要的考点,离开了这一点,高级表达方式就失去了存在意义。

高考英语书面表达常见的十大错误

一. 汉式英语

(误) Good good study, day day up.

(正) Study hard and you’ll make progress every day.

(误) There is a notice in the park, saying:“To take notice of safe. Slippery sideway ”

(正)There is a notice in the park, saying:“Watch your step. Slippery sideway. ”

方法点拨要减少汉式英语必须做到:(1)养成用英语思维进行写作的习惯,注意中西文化差异所带来的不同表达;(2)平时多归纳总结、纠正汉式英语;(3)多读原汁原味英语

二. 主谓关系不一致

(误)In the bedroom there are a bed, a desk and a chair.

(正) In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.

方法点拨要注意There be 句型的主谓一致,be的人称与数应与之后第一个主语保持一致,即需满足就近原则。

三. 词性混用

(误)60﹪ of the students against the idea of entrance fees.

(正)60﹪ of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.

(误)Two days past before his letter arrived.

(正)Two days passed before his letter arrived.

方法点拨平时记忆单词一定要把词性记清楚,避免用时出错。

四. 重复累赘

(误)The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry it.

(正) The box is too heavy for the weak boy to carry.

(误) We hope to improve our work better.

(正) We hope to improve our work.

方法点拨有些英语单词本身自带某个意思,或由于语法需要不能再出现某一单词,如果学生基本功不够扎实,就常常出现造句累赘现象。

五. 选词或搭配不当

(误)Tom was in such a hurry that he forgot his schoolbag on the bus.

(正)Tom was in such a hurry that he left his schoolbag on the bus.

方法点拨辨析近义词的细微差别,还要避免汉语思维,平时多积累一些固定搭配。

六. 无关联词

(误)I am tired, I must go to bed.

(正)I am tired, so I must go to bed.

方法点拨英语句子特点之一重“形合”,句子的各个部分由各种关联词联在一起。而汉语句子重“意合”,句子前后连接主要是通过上下文的逻辑意义来实现,很多学生在写作时往往忽略这一点造成句子的错误。

七. 非平行结构、逻辑不一致

(误)There were 40 foreigners came to visit our school.

(正)There were 40 foreigners who came to visit our school.

(正)40 foreigners came to visit our school.

(误)Without a friend will feel lonely.

(正)Without a friend one will feel lonely.

方法点拨一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(除祈使句外),如果把句子的某一部分当成一个句子,就会导致非完整句子。句子无论长短,在安排上要合乎逻辑,衔接自然,使句内之间过渡自然、层次分明。而学生在写作中常出现未用过渡词语、非平行结构和语义不完整的分割句等错误。

八. 句子缺乏统一性

(误)Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard.

(正)Being an honest man, Tom never tells a lie.

方法点拨注意句子的前后意思要符合逻辑,主题一致,避免前言不搭后语。

九. 句子缺乏连贯性或指代不明

(误)Rose falls in love with John is in love with Mary.

(正)Rose falls in love with John, while John is in love with Mary.

方法点拨保证句子的完整性,即一个完整的句子必须包含一个主语(组合)和一个谓语(组合),祈使句除外。

十. 标点符号误用

(误)《China Daily》is a great help to the English learners.

(正)China Daily is a great help to the English learners.

(误)Li Ping is not old enough, he can not join the army.

(正)Li Ping is not old enough. He can not join the army./Li Ping is not old enough to join the army.

方法点拨英语无书名号,报刊、书名等单词首字母大写,或斜体;一般情况下,一个主谓结构就构成一个英语句子,句末应用句号。


 

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